From: Emily9263@aol.com My new AAMRN, give me comments please! I need encouragment to continue! Misty stared out at the window the rain dripped down the windows... she was sad... Ash was gone... she than smiled when she remembered the day he told her the three words that made her forgive as long as she heard them... She could imagine his face and his every movement in saying it... 'I Love You...' She stared out at the window 'just like the day... he passed away... but the rain cleared... I remember...' Note : Here are the ages to avoid confusion... Ash - 16 Tayla - 16 (has a role in the fanfic) Misty - 18 Brock - 21 (it's hard thinking of ages) I haven't written a 'good' AAMRN for awhile so I'm trying again. * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * Hearts Mended By Ai-Chan Part One - Targeted "Ash Ketchum, you still owe me a bike!" Misty shouted. "When will you get over that dumb bike?" Ash asked. "When you pay for it which will be a million years!" "Oh yeah?" "YEAH!" "A couple should stop fighting!" *WHACK!* "Were not a couple!" they chorused. "Pika pika... chu..." (I'm tired...cha...) *growl* "Uh Pikachu are you okay?" "I think Pikachu's hungry" Misty said. "We should get into the next town... where is it Brock?" "Brock?" They looked down to see Brock knocked out... Ash looked at Misty. Misty looked at Ash. "You shouldn't have knocked him out Misty!" "You should've paid me for my bike than!" "When will you get over that dumb bike?!" "When you pay me back, Ash Ketchum!" "How much does it cost?!" "100,000!" Gulp, "that much?" "Mine was custom made!" "Pikachu, let's run for it maybe we can lose her! "Pikachu!" "Hey Ash, wait up!" "You won't get away from me!" So our heroe's run off to the next town... In a coach a womans smile is seen... "Will he do?" "Bring him to me..." "Yes madam" as the servant put his hands over his face... "I put the Dream of hynosis on you Ash Ketchum.." * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * Part Two - A Dream, Admiting "Brock where are we now?" "According to this map the middle of no where.." "Ash you have the worst direction in the world!" "Your the one that wanted to take a shortcut!" "You can get lost in a mirror!" "I bet you break mirrors!" "Break it up! We don't want to argue now do we?" "Yes we do!" they chorused. "Let's just get some sleep..." "Fine!" and the three fell asleep by a fire in their sleeping bags. "Goodnight Brock, Pikachu, Misty, see ya in the morning!" Ash closed his eyes... "Goodnight Ash... sweet dreams..." * * * * * * * * * * * * Begin Dream Sequence * * * * * * * * * * * * 'Ash...' 'Wha?' 'Ash...' 'Save Me!!' 'Misty!' 'Ash Ketchum... wouldn't you like to be with me instead?' Ash whirled around there was a beautiful woman with long blonde hair that was curled passing down her back with a red bow. Ash felt drawn in... 'Yes' 'Come here...' 'Ash!! Save me!' 'Misty!' that snapped in his head. 'Ash Ketchum...' 'Ash!!!!!!!!!' 'Misty!!!!' * * * * * * * * * * * * End Dream Sequence * * * * * * * * * * * * *pant* *gasp* "Ash are you okay?" "Yeah.. Misty... go back to sleep don't worry about me..." 'How can I?' Misty thought going back to sleep. 'Misty... what did the dream mean...' * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * Part Three - Realization 'Can it be... I love her?' "Pikapi pika pikachu?" (Ash are you okay?) "Yeah... I guess so... I had this weird dream..." "Pika..." (oh...) "What do you think... did you hear that?" 'He heard me!' "pika?" (huh?) "I must be hearing things..." "pika pika pikachu?" (Should I get Misty?) "NO!" Ash blushed a bright crimison. "pika pika.." (so that's it..) Pikachu's ears twitched and it smiled. "You know.. please don't tell Misty!" "pika pika pikachu!" (pokemon's honor!) 'what? he likes her? I am more beautiful!' "that girl in the dream almost stopped me... I guess I love Misty so I snapped out of it.." "pika pi.." (Ash..) "But Misty will never like me that way..." "pika pika pikapi!" (don't lose hope Ash!) "Why?" "pikapi pika pikachu..." (Ash I'm sure she loves you..) "I guess I can hope.." "pika pikachu! pika pikachu!" (at'a boy! now cook me something!) "Here's some poke-chow Pikachu" "chaaaaaaa!" (yuuuum!) *munch* *munch* *Growl* Ash's stomach growled. "Pikachu can I have some?" "pika!" (mine!) "C'mon it looks good!" "pika!" (mine!) "Pikachu...!" "chu pika...Pikapi Pika...CHU!!!!" (Look here Ash... it's.. MINE!!!") "AHHHHHHHHHH!" * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * Part Four Comming Soon!